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D esireE roticS trokingI nvitingR ealityE ntranced

F akeA ffectionT ruthE scapes

H ealingO pensP leasuresE nvoked

L ostI nvolvedN arcissticG reedE cstasyR ememberedS ilence
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Others say he wasn't worthy of me I just say I loved!:(
Some call a fool I say a coward
I can give without regret and hurt
can u say so?

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:iconsteampunkarcherydude:
intresting use of lexis, with the gaps inbetween the words, took me a few mins to work it out LOL nice work, and i like the idea that readers have to decipher the poem. keep it up

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mordest et ferrum freiarte beataie
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I have found myself doing this of late like a dual personality of sorts two views felt at one time hope I am not going schitzo!Ilmao
Hugs steamed style~

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SK:)
:iconsteampunkarcherydude:
XD lol yea, it really was great work XD

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mordest et ferrum freiarte beataie
:iconsharikaye:
Thank you Rhys!I have more of this and I shall try to do more in the future thanks for saying so I enjoyed it so too!Hugs!:]
I am still exicited about ur graduation!!!!!!

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SK:)
:iconsteampunkarcherydude:
lol, yea, so am i XD, carnt wait for your future works, i await them with great anticipation

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mordest et ferrum freiarte beataie
:iconsharikaye:
I always await the muse myself seems she can b a malady!:lol:Hugs!:]

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SK:)
:iconsteampunkarcherydude:
LOL yea, its just waiting for that flare of inspiration lol

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mordest et ferrum freiarte beataie
:iconsharikaye:
Me to hon that muse quite the chase on here :lol:!Hugs!:]

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SK:)
:iconsteampunkarcherydude:
tell me about it LOL

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mordest et ferrum freiarte beataie

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